Without your advice we're rats or less, master Yoda.
We've made this not just to have good critics or being praised, no way, we are aware that we're not musicians but two friends wanting to have fun and hung out, just that. I'm from Madrid (Spain) and he's from Barcelona, don't know if you have any idea about spanish geography, but that's about 600 km, and we were not going to waste money or stuff, I recorded my vocals and stuff with a shit mic from my laptop and I don't know if my friend did the same with the chorus, but I know he did his best to fix the shit sound from a laptop's mic. Just that. We don't want to be mentioned in any web about how much we could do it better, we know it's shit. But go ahead and do it, that's the goal of this topic. Show us, without any shame, what are you capable of.
Just that.